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CLASSIFICATION ESSAY
Sunday, 19 October 2014 07:58 | Written by Yaya 0 comments
Assalamualaikum. hehehe 2 entry in one day. Okay. this is an entry about the classification essay. i love this genre. i dont know why. maybe because it so structured but it can be tricky. so we have to be careful when writing this essay. Okay, this essay is more like u have one subject and u divide it into 3 parts, but make sure those 3 are dominators for that particular subject.

For example, if u are going to write about type of school, the dominator will be national school, private school and vocasional school. so it will cover all types of school within this topic.

and this esssay was written by Nur Nayli, my partner, She wrote about types of transportation and her dominator were on road, air and water. Mr Adlan mentioned that our essay was quite awkward due to the bad syntax. In addition, there are a lots of wrong choice of words used in this essay. Therefore, we have to widen our vocabulary and use our grammar correctly.



Till we meet again. k bye. 


p/s: currently build up  my body, with lots of chocolate and cakes. yes baby yes. im gaining weight right now. bhahahahahaha :P

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