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DESCRIPTION ESSAY
Sunday, 19 October 2014 06:51 | Written by Yaya 0 comments
Hello and assalamualaikum. fuhhhh it had been a long time since the last entry. and yeahh, im in vacation right now. lol not that vacation. im in semester break. and i do forgot to post an entry bout the reflective journal regarding of description essay. FORGIVE ME FOR MY BAD ATTITUDE.

okay. this type of essay totally a challenge to me. when i wrote it, it quite difficult for me to write it. becoz im afraid that it might turn out into a narrative essay, and yes, it did. this task is actually a group work and my partner is Nur Nayli, hehehe i miss her a lot. I wrote an essay entitled Orientation Week as a College Student. Both of us agreed to this topic because we experienced it together. 

I dont really know on how to write this essay genre even though Mr Adlan had been explained it very well to me. Maybe because i dont really like to use all my five senses when im writing an essay.Furthermore, i dont know on how to express my words correctly without make it sounds more like an narrative essay. 

I am more a structured person and this essay even though it has a structure but not that same like definition and exemplification essay. Therefore, it was quite difficult to me but it was a great experience. At least, i got a chance to write it.  And here, my essay. 



And as a review from mr Adlan, he said that my essay sounds more like a narrative essay rather than a description essay. I have to work hard on it. In addition, i have a number of using wrong choice of words. And there's one day that Mr Adlan read us a student's from another class description essay. It was great, almost like we read a novel! im so envy with her. I can see a huge difference between mine and her. She used all that senses in her writing, u almost can feel her experienced. She did a great job, afterall.

I guess thats all from me. See ya around, peeps!
WONDERLAND
السلام عليكم. بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم. Changing for good ain't a crime.To hate others is ugly. To hate yourself is uglier.Life is short. Laugh.Live
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