REVIEW ON QUIZ WRITING 2
Sunday, 19 October 2014 21:57 | Written by Yaya
0 commentsAnnyeonghaseyo. kiyaaaa just now i want to post an entry about the review on quiz writing 2. from what i can see, i didnt improve that much in terms of score. but i can understand why. i will tell the reason later on.
okay, on this quiz, we had given a choices whether want to write an essay on classification essay or description essay. as u can read from my previous entry, i prefer classification essay more than description essay. and for some reason i can sense that Mr Adlan will put this topic in this quiz because he mentioned about the Facebook friends many times in the class. Hehehe lol.
The reasons why i didnt choose to write a description essay is because i dont understand whether it was about a desirable university campus or college. See? even that one simple thing i dont understand. so how am i going to write that essay? Therefore, it will be much better if i write about Facebook friends. Another reason is because i dont know whether i can write it nicely without make it sounds more like a narrative essay. kih kih kih
Mr Adlan reviewed my essay. He said that i have a good points and i almost hit the highest marks on content which i got 30 marks for the content only. But the problem is on my language. My language is just like a medium level and same goes with my vocabulary. And it seems like i keep using wrong choice of words, It might be a trouble to me if i keep doing the same mistakes. Hmm i was wondering why my language didnt improve much. Probably because i didnt read a lot. Emm maybe because i kept reading Fixi Novel which is a malay novel. hmmm i have to do something about it.
oh yes, i had finished my speaking test last thursday. it was quite okay but my groupmate does have problems with that since they proficiency is not in english but in engineering. But i dont think that is a big problem. because i think that english language is totally necesaary in irder for you to get a job at least. naaa im not going to mambling again. k byeeee
REVIEW ON QUIZ WRITING 2
Sunday, 19 October 2014 21:57 | Written by Yaya
0 commentsAnnyeonghaseyo. kiyaaaa just now i want to post an entry about the review on quiz writing 2. from what i can see, i didnt improve that much in terms of score. but i can understand why. i will tell the reason later on.
okay, on this quiz, we had given a choices whether want to write an essay on classification essay or description essay. as u can read from my previous entry, i prefer classification essay more than description essay. and for some reason i can sense that Mr Adlan will put this topic in this quiz because he mentioned about the Facebook friends many times in the class. Hehehe lol.
The reasons why i didnt choose to write a description essay is because i dont understand whether it was about a desirable university campus or college. See? even that one simple thing i dont understand. so how am i going to write that essay? Therefore, it will be much better if i write about Facebook friends. Another reason is because i dont know whether i can write it nicely without make it sounds more like a narrative essay. kih kih kih
Mr Adlan reviewed my essay. He said that i have a good points and i almost hit the highest marks on content which i got 30 marks for the content only. But the problem is on my language. My language is just like a medium level and same goes with my vocabulary. And it seems like i keep using wrong choice of words, It might be a trouble to me if i keep doing the same mistakes. Hmm i was wondering why my language didnt improve much. Probably because i didnt read a lot. Emm maybe because i kept reading Fixi Novel which is a malay novel. hmmm i have to do something about it.
oh yes, i had finished my speaking test last thursday. it was quite okay but my groupmate does have problems with that since they proficiency is not in english but in engineering. But i dont think that is a big problem. because i think that english language is totally necesaary in irder for you to get a job at least. naaa im not going to mambling again. k byeeee
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